tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33666188.post8743051278276506779..comments2024-03-26T01:03:39.965-07:00Comments on Janette Rallison's Blog: Worst first line contest winner--yes!Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33666188.post-15994679711037807162007-09-24T10:20:00.000-07:002007-09-24T10:20:00.000-07:00you were just finishing a fast when you wrote thos...you were just finishing a fast when you wrote those?Rick & Karen Mittanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02399925808140589803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33666188.post-77910872995045563862007-09-15T09:56:00.000-07:002007-09-15T09:56:00.000-07:00sick.sick.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33666188.post-59265582262998292272007-09-12T19:05:00.000-07:002007-09-12T19:05:00.000-07:00LOL. OMG, that's too funny. But I could totally se...LOL. OMG, that's too funny. But I could totally see that happening, but with dialogue. Love the run-on lasagna description.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33666188.post-86520041576145148192007-09-10T22:29:00.000-07:002007-09-10T22:29:00.000-07:00Janette, I'm so proud to know you!Janette, I'm so proud to know you!Marsha Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15389060049107102815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33666188.post-48797736385276953192007-09-10T19:47:00.000-07:002007-09-10T19:47:00.000-07:00Tears...springing from... eyes...lungs...bursting ...Tears...springing from... eyes...lungs...bursting from lack of air...stomach...hurting...tenacious dhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05441896691841159902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33666188.post-43927612669127628582007-09-10T10:37:00.000-07:002007-09-10T10:37:00.000-07:00As soon as I saw your entry (thanks for being the ...As soon as I saw your entry (thanks for being the first, no pressure) I knew none of us stood a chance. That was very awesome bad writing. Go, you!Chillygatorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12303148892632200333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33666188.post-13359867872350361102007-09-10T09:33:00.000-07:002007-09-10T09:33:00.000-07:00I'm feeling kind of hungry in a warped way. But yo...I'm feeling kind of hungry in a warped way. But you inspired me. This sentence is dedicated to you:<BR/><BR/>The ticking of a clock could have been heard if there was a clock in the room, but since there wasn’t, only silence surrounded Jack as he stared after his girlfriend, watching her departure in amazement since she’d just told him she never wanted to see him again and like an idiot he didn’t say a thing but allowed her to leave without another word from him while he wondered if he’d ever see her again.Heather Moorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11634399663804195312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33666188.post-40778706682106716352007-09-10T07:27:00.000-07:002007-09-10T07:27:00.000-07:00Ouch! Those are bad. But congratulations on your m...Ouch! Those are bad. But congratulations on your most glorious win!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16986635883342034311noreply@blogger.com